Модуль 8. Writing B1: письма, истории, мнения и отзывы · урок 38
Lesson 38. Writing a simple story
Объяснение темы
Ты научишься писать simple story на уровне B1: с понятным началом, событием, реакцией и концом.
История строится как движение: setting → problem → action → ending.Структура B1 story| Часть | Вопросы | Useful language |
|---|---|---|
| Beginning | Who? Where? When? | Last Saturday... / It was a cold evening... |
| Problem | What happened? | Suddenly... / Then something strange happened. |
| Action | What did people do? | We decided to... / I tried to... |
| Ending | How did it finish? | In the end... / Finally... |
Картинка помогает придумать место, проблему и детали.Grammar focus- Past Simple: main events — I arrived, I saw, we decided.
- Past Continuous: background — I was walking home when...
- Time linkers: first, then, after that, suddenly, finally.
Common mistakes
Yesterday I go to the park and see my friend.
Better: Yesterday I went to the park and saw my friend.
When I was walking, I was seeing an accident.
Better: When I was walking, I saw an accident.
B1 writing tip
Хорошая история не обязана быть сложной. Достаточно 4–5 абзацев, понятной последовательности и нескольких деталей: weather, feelings, place, problem, result.
Добавляй детали: место, проблема, чувства, результат.| Flat sentence | Better B1 sentence |
|---|---|
| I lost my bag. | Suddenly, I realised that my bag was not under the table. |
| I was happy. | I felt relieved because a waiter found it ten minutes later. |
Примеры
Example 1. Short B1 story
Last Friday, I was walking home after work when I saw a small dog near the bus stop. It looked cold and frightened. I tried to call it, but it ran away. Then I noticed a phone number on its collar. I called the owner, and twenty minutes later she arrived. In the end, the dog was safe, and I felt really happy.
Почему хорошо: есть setting, problem, action and ending.
Example 2. Adding detail
Basic: I lost my phone.
Better: I lost my phone while I was getting off a crowded bus in the city centre.
Example 3. Time linkers
First, we checked the map. Then we asked a woman for help. After that, we found the station. Finally, we caught the last train.
Example 4. Add story details
Weak: I went to the station. I missed the train. I went home.
Better: Last Monday, I went to the station to visit my friend. Suddenly, I realised I was on the wrong platform. I ran as fast as I could, but I missed the train. In the end, I bought another ticket and arrived only one hour late.
Почему хорошо: есть time, place, problem, action and result.
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